申请美国本科，文书写作秘诀是什么？

书写内容：

申请原因：

文书的最开始当然是要交代自己的背景啦！

要让amission看一眼就知道你递交申请的原因是啥，简单直接的表达会让你的application在多如牛毛的personal statement里成为一股清流，还省去大学招生办不少过滤废话的时间！

短短的一段或两段里，小伙伴们应重点解决以下两个问题：

为什么申请这个科系：何时开始对这个科目感兴趣？你是否有逐渐加深对这个科目的了解？

你如何保持对这个科目的兴趣？你对这个科目的兴趣是否影响了你的未来甚至职业规划？你为什么想要在大学阶段选修这门科目？为什么选择来美国求学：过去有无接触英式教育？如有，何时开始、为什么、是否对你的大学申请选择有直接影响？如无，为什么选择美国大学本科？

个人努力：

然后，就是小伙伴们向大学证明自己真的辗转反侧、茶饭不思、悬梁刺股、炒鸡炒鸡想读这个系的好时候啦！

我：报告大学，我才不是思想的巨人，行动的矮子呢！我可脚踏实地啦！

大学：那就证明一波呗。每年辣么多人申请，我干嘛非要招你？

我：那当然是因为——学术篇：上学期间你是如何储备相关知识的=你选择的A-Level（alevel）科目对你理解这个科目有什么作用？

课余你是如何储备相关知识的=读过的书、看过的电影、听过的讲座、follow过的节目？

平常有没有多看书多读报？

近期你申请科目的领域里有没有发生什么大事件？你是否读过相关的报道分析？这些事件如何启发了你？

经历篇：（在你到目前的所有经历里找和报的科系关联度最高哒！）你是否参加过任何活动或竞赛？这些活动与你申请的学科有无直接关系？如有，你收获了什么？如无，这个活动对你有什么特殊意义/对你起到了怎样的帮助值得你写进文书？

你是否有过任何工作或社会活动经验（包括班干部、学校图书管理员啥的）？是有偿或志愿？如有偿，你工作的目的与对这个科目的兴趣有关吗？如无偿，你认为自己从中获得最大的收获是什么？是否有任何个人兴趣爱好或特殊才能？这些特长对自己/未来对大学有什么帮助？

国际生：你认为自己有足够的英语水平应对美国的大学课程吗？你过去有完成过任何纯英教学的课程吗？有无任何证据能显示你具备良好的适应与交流能力（在美国高中参加辩论队会是个炒鸡好的例子！）？

附加信息：

还有一些关于自己的额外信息，同学们千万记得提供哦！

eferreentry：有gap year的计划吗？如有，打算利用这一年完成什么事情？（记得要证明自己并没有荒废青春哦）已经过了gapyear？过去一年都做了什么事情/为自己的大学生活做了什么准备？

AS成绩不太理想是否有任何非人为不可控因素的干扰？是否有任何证据能说服大学你的A2预估成绩妥妥的？

国际学生这一条真不是歧视。但我们要用自己棒棒哒的英语表述证明自己一点都不比本地学生弱！分分钟写作水平还高过美国同学好吗！

书写注意事项。

1、内容空洞

对于PS一定要结合实例来写，用例子来展示自己的能力，对所申专业的热爱等。而很多申请人写出来的美国大学文书PS，很多是陈述自己有哪方面的能力，对专业很有兴趣，有学习的能力，动手能力强，把这些个人特点放到文章中，却没有下文，来支持上面的论点，毫无说服力。

一篇好的美国留学申请文书PS是用例子来充实的，申请人的优秀品质和能力也是通过例子向读者展示的，而不是简单的列举出来。

2、主次不分，没有逻辑

很多申请人写出来的美国大学文书PS，让人看了之后分不清主次，不知道作者主要想表达什么意思，也看不出来作者有什么能吸引人的地方。

3、啰嗦，语言不够简练

美国硕士留学申请中，很多同学写的美国留学申请文书PS语言都不够简练，认为写的多效果好，而事实远非如此。

适当的运用感叹句或语气词容易让读者形成共鸣，但在一篇美国大学文书PS中，反复出现这样的句子，尤其是相似的句子就显得矫情了，更不能打动读者。

参考范文。

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