雅思写作实战干货技巧：逻辑连贯性

小伙伴们,2021年已经正式过去两个月了,3月已经正式了,对于只拿到有条件录取通知书的小伙伴是不是现在还在”烤鸭”状态焦灼? 今天我们就来聊一聊雅思写作的一些小技巧.

雅思写作是比较容易得分的项目,也是我们国内的考生相对容易比较学习技巧准备的科目. 在描述一个话题或是讨论一个问题的时候, 逻辑是最重要的,这代表着你的写作思路, 保证文章的连贯性和一致性,符合逻辑是最容易掌握的技巧.雅思写作中，怎样坚持文章的连贯性?什么是文章的连贯性﹙coherence﹚?一个阶段不是乱七八糟的，而是奇妙的组合，语句的摆放次序合乎逻辑，从一个语句到另一个语句的过渡非常流通﹙smooth﹚并且天然，语法正确朗朗上口等等是都使得文章愈加流通，本文将为考生介绍一下雅思写作高分技巧：坚持连贯性和一致性，期望能对考生们在雅思写作中有所协助。

连贯性包括意连和形连两个方面，前者指的是内涵的逻辑性，后者指的是运用变换词语。当然这两者常常是不可分割的。只有形连而没有意连，语句之间就没有内涵的有机的联络;反之，只有意连而没有形连，有时行文就不行流通。

1、意连

阶段中语句的摆放应遵循必定的次第，不能想到什么就写什么。假如在着笔之前没有构思，边写边想，写写停停，那就写不出一气呵成的好文章来。下面介绍几种常见的摆放方式。

a.按时刻先后摆放﹙chronological arrangement﹚

b.按方位远近摆放﹙spatial arrangement﹚，由远及近，从远处﹙"from a istance"﹚写起，然后"get closer"，再到﹙" ten feet away"﹚，最后是"insie the pagoa"……当然，按方位远近来写不等于都是由远及近。根据需要，也能够由近及远，由外至内等等。

c.按逻辑关系摆放﹙logical arrangement﹚

a.按重要性顺序摆放﹙arrangement insgroupsof importance﹚

b.由一般到特别摆放﹙general-to-specific arrangement﹚

c.由特别到一般摆放﹙specific-to-general arrangement﹚

范例：i o not unerstan why people confuse my siamese cat, prissy, with the one i ha several years ago, henry. the two cats are only alike in bree. prissy, a quiet, feminine feline, loves me early but not possessively. she likes to keep her istance from people, exert her inepenence an is never so rue as to beg, lick, or sniff unceremoniously. her usual posture is sitting upright, eyes close, perfectly still. prissy is a very proper cat. henry, on the other han, love me early but possessively. he was my shaow from morning till night. he expecte me to constantly entertain him. henry never care who saw him o anything, whether it was ecorous or not, an he usually offene my friens in some way. the cat mae himself quite comfortable, on the top of the television, across stranger＇s feet or laps, in bes, rawers, sacks, closets, or nooks. the ifference between them is imperceptible to strangers.  

2、形连

行文的逻辑性常常要靠恰当的变换词语及其他手法来完成。请读下面这一段文字并找出文中用以承上启下的词语：

walter＇s goal in life was to become a successful surgeon. first, though, he ha to get through high school, so he concentrate all his efforts on his stuies --- in particular, biology, chemistry, an math. because he worke constantly on these subjects, walter became proficient in them; however, walter forgot that he neee to master other subjects besies those he ha chosen. as a result, uring his junior year of high school, walter faile both english an latin. consequently, he ha to repeat these subjects an he was almost unable to grauate on scheule. finally, on june 6, walter achieve the first step towar realizing his goal.

本文中起承上启下的词语有两种，一种是变换词语﹙transitional wors or phrases﹚，另一种是起变换效果的其他衔接手法﹙linking evices﹚。前者依次有：first, though, so, in particular, an, because, however, besies, as a result, both…an, consequently, an, finally.后者依次是：he, he, his, his, he, these, them, he, those, his, he, these, his.本段1有词汇105个，所运用的变换词语及其他衔接用语共26个词，约占该段总词汇量的四分之一。由此可见，掌握好transitions不仅对行文的流通﹙smoothness﹚有利，并且关于学生在规则时刻内写足所要求的字数也是不无优点的。一个阶段里假如没有transitions也就很难有coherence了.      

有损连接性的几种状况：

考生在写作中经常呈现下面几种错误：

1﹚不必要的改动时态，比方：

in the movie, robert refor was a spy. he goes to his office where he foun everyboy ea. other spies wante to kill him, so he takes refuge with julie christie. at her house, he ha waite for the heat to ie own, but they come after him anyway.

2﹚不必要的改动单复数，比方：

everyboy looks for satisfaction in his life. they want to be happy. but if he seeks only pleasure in the short run, the person will soon run out of pleasure an life will catch up to him. they nee to pursue the eeper pleasure of satisfaction in work an in relationships.

3﹚不必要的改动人称，比方：

now more than ever, parents nee to be in touch with their chilren＇s activities because moern life has the tenency to cause cleavages in the family. you nee to arrange family like it so that family members will o things together an know one another. you nee to give up isolate pleasures of your own an realize that parents have a set of obligations to sponsor togetherness an therefore sponsor knowlege.

因而写作中，必定要注意时态，人称以及数的改变是否正确，要注意保持一致。

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