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申请类型

研究生

教育经历

09/2013-07/2017 山西大学 信息管理与信息系统(主修)经济学(辅修) 本科 2.8/4.0

语言/标化考试成绩

toefl: 105 gre:315+3

工作经历

shanghai tongda venture capital co., ltd.,shanghai 07/2017-present

investment assistant,investment development division

² mainly conduct research on the industry and listed company;

² participate in due diligence of investment projects and assist in completing due diligence reports;

² complete the financial model construction, valuation and investment return analysis of the proposed investment project;

² keep close communication with key companies to keep abreast of the latest industry trends.

实习经历

gf securities co., ltd., linyi 07/2015-08/2015

intern

² responsible for the development of banking channels and other market channels, paid attention to the development of financial products;

² provided clients with asset allocation advice and other basic services based on their investment preferences and risk tolerance;

² liaised and communicated with customers, maintain customer relationships;

² planned, organized and implemented marketing activities in the responsible region.

科研经历

  1. research onadvertising word bidding on the internet09/2016-05/2017

independent researcher

² used marginal revenue and marginal cost analysis method s to complete my graduation thesis entitled online key words advertising bidding strategy.

  1. chinese commodity price spillover network structure and dynamic interaction07/2016-08/2016

research assistant

² collected price data for different commodity classes and calculated sample data accordingly;

² learned relevant mathematical knowledge and assisted in econometric analysis;

² assisted groupmembers to chart the analysis results to complete the writing of the paper;

² participated in the meeting and discussion, summarized the research results and formed the final conclusion.

  1. research onfinancing difficulties and countermeasures of small and micro science and technology enterprises in shanxi province 09/2015-06/2016

team leader

² coordinated team members’job duties, and controlled the overall work progress;

² led the team to analyze the collected data and discuss the economic characteristics;

² published a paper as the first author in a journal, u.s.-china cultural comment.

  1. some personal insights into the “needham thesis”03/2016-06/2016

independent researcher

² reviewed literature and watched relevant documentaries to analyze the “needham thesis” from the perspectives of chinese scientific thought, feudal social system and economics;

² independently completed an article entitled some personal insights into the “needham thesis”.

奖项/证书

  1. outstanding award of the 7th “innovation challenge cup” business plan competition of shanxi university 05/2016

  2. the third prize in central china of the 18th ‘fltrp • jd.com cup’ national english debating competition 03/2015

  3. merit student of shanxi university in 2014 06/2014

  4. the second prize of “outstanding student scholarship” of shanxi university 04/2014

  5. the third prize in the first shanxi university student international trade commodity exhibition 04/2014

  6. the best debater in “epc debate competition” of the second shanxi provincial department of land and resources 04/2014

申请结果

院校

专业

结果

university of michigan-ann arbor

masters of applied economics

拒录

university of california, los angeles

master of applied economics

waitlist

university of illinois at urbana-champaign

ms in policy economics

拒录

northeastern university

ms in commerce and economic development

录取

george washington university

ma in applied economics

拒录

university of southern california

master of science in applied economics and econometrics

录取

georgia institute of technology

ms in economics

拒录

boston university

ma in economics

拒录

georgetown university

masters degree in applied economics

拒录

背景分析

学生优势: 双专业,托福分数,以及工作和科研等软件背景。

学生劣势: gpa偏低,经济学先修课程不足。

文书思路

sop

开头:开门见山交代自己目前在创业投资公司任职,参与了多个投资项目的尽职调查积累了很多宝贵的行业经验。同时意识到,要想在目前的工作中取得更大的突破,还需要更多的专业知识。结合自己的职业目标说明了解过申请项目后觉得很适合我。

主体:详述背景优势。工作中讲述了一个做的最成功的也最具含金量的项目,从而专业知识的提升和综合能力的磨练。本科学习中积累的理论知识,以及在做毕业论文时自学了缺乏的先修课程。此外,表述信息管理和信息系统专业学习的计算机知识将使我能够更好地利用软件工具进行经济学研究。科研背景写了发表过论文的一个科研培训项目和跟着校外教授参加的一个关于商品价格的研究项目。

结尾:重申向学校展示出色的表现的信心。

ps

开头引用胡祖六先生在一次采访中的观点,中国经济体制有两个弱点:一是环境问题(污染问题、能源问题等);二是金融问题。引出自己学习经济学的兴趣和经济学于社会发展的重要意义。接下来从经济学的角度分析了一下国内房地产行业过热的原因和问题。最后自己希望参与到中国金融市场的改革中。

申请总结

对于硬件条件不足的,比如先修课程这块,还是要想办法在文书中圆回来。另外,这个学生我们后来也有给每个学校发gpa解释信,将学生塑造成一个虽然gpa不理想但是自己是一个有想法有目标且一直在努力的形象。ucla wait后也第一时间给学校发了love letter,更新工作上的新成就和行业新认知。

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