英语专业如何转申金融？

申请类型

研究生

教育经历

09/2016-06/2020 山东大学威海分校 英语 本科 83.07/100

02/2017-07/2020 山东大学威海分校 金融 本科双学位83.73/100

08/2018-09/2018 university of california, irvine summer session 4.0/4.0

语言/标化考试成绩

ielts 7.5, gre325+3.5

工作经历

实习经历

huaxi securities-intern in the securities issuance epartment 07/2019-09/2019

l learne the process of auiting, regulating an issuing bons, operation of the quotation system, an knowlege of plege-style repo

l mae ue iligence for parent company, all subsiiaries, joint ventures an china securities regulatory commission

l reviewe financial statements by analyzing financial inexes of all subsiiaries, associate companies an joint ventures

l checke bot concession an analyze the profitability, risk control inicators an franchise rights of the enterprise

l gaine a comprehension of the ue iligence process, operations as well as the supervision of intermeiaries an bourses, asset backe

l securitization issue by environmental protection companies an buil－operate－transfer moel operate by governments

china everbright bank-intern in the real estate creit epartment01/2019-02/2019

l mae basic analysis for financial statements an checke corporate mortgage loans

科研经历

奖项/证书

secon-class special scholarship in the summer session at uci excellent class committee member in the school of translation stuies star of the class in the shanong university “power of role moels” contest first prize in the employment theme class meeting competition outstaning representative of class cares in the school of translation stuies first prize in the “three-line poem” competition

test for english majors-ban 4

college english test ban 6

college english test ban 4

certificate of putonghua proficiency test level 2 a

申请结果

院校

专业

结果

johns hopkins university

ms in finance

录取

washington university in st. louis

ms in finance

录取

university of illinois, urbana-champaign

ms in finance

拒录

university of california, irvine

master of finance

拒录

ohio state university, columbus

specialize master of business-finance

录取

vanerbilt university

ms in finance

拒录

case western reserve university

ms in management-finance

录取

boston university

ms in mathematical finance

waitlist

背景分析

学生优势：

1. 有uci的夏校经历，学习过商科课程

2. ielts和gre突出

3. 有金融相关的实习经历和丰富的科研经历

学生劣势：

1. 本科辅修金融，所以专业知识方面不够系统和全面

2. 本科均分不够突出

文书思路

jhu文书思路：

first essay：groune in the johns hopkins’ legacy of excellence an research, we aren’t limite by traition. we’re inspire by it. at johns hopkins carey business school, we shape business leaers who seize opportunity, inspire change, an create lasting value. how is your future inustry evolving an in what ways o you hope to inspire change an create lasting value?

从科研项目research on the measures to improve the social security realization mechanism in shanong province, base on the perspective of establishing the labor relation of “equality + efficiency”，发现中国低收入群体和退休老人面临的经济难题。然后表达出计划通过金融创新工具来制定合理的投资计划，帮助这些低收入群体提高收入，改善生活质量，从而为社会带来改变，创造出lasting value.

secon essay：3﹚ at johns hopkins university, we have the common goal of improving the lives of others. johns hopkins grauates work to improve society in ifferent ways, from taking on the worl’s biggest challenges to transforming their local communities. escribe one way in which you have alreay contribute to one of your communities ﹙family, school, neighborhoo, work place﹚ beyon the expecte.

文书内容描述学生在大学三年中参加的“彩虹桥关爱残障儿童志愿活动”，主要体现了在这一过程中，学生对残障儿童带来的巨大改变，这是出乎他自己意料的。最初，学生不是很清楚志愿活动能给社区带来什么。在该活动中，从帮助残障儿童们的日常活动，到提供心理辅导和就业规划指导，这些孩子们取得了巨大的进步。学生也更加理解了志愿活动的意义，意识到自己对社区做出的贡献。

please provie any aitional clarifying information that you wish to share with the amissions committee regaring your acaemic recor, personal history or professional attributes. ﹙300-500 wors﹚

描述学生的uci夏校经历，在华西证券的实习经历，并简要描述未来的职业规划

wustl文书思路：

require essay 1﹚olin business school champions better ecision-making by preparing an coaching leaers who will change the worl, for goo. we strive to achieve the highest stanars of behavior, quality, an professionalism in all that we o. share with us the events that le you to pursue your program of interest an provie examples of how you woul like to change the worl for goo. ﹙250-wor maximum﹚

思路同jhu first require

require essay 2﹚ escribe what you anticipate will be the most impactful change in the financial services inustry in the next few years. share how you inten to contribute to that inustry post-grauation. ﹙250-wor maximum﹚

学生认为金融市场甚至是整个经济社会最大的变化就是共享经济的出现和发展，和中国开始试点的很多“共享项目”类似，包括共享汽车，共享空间，共享雨伞等。在金融行业也是这样：金融市场的共享化方向越来越明显。然后就是针对这方面，写一下以后想要积累经验，学习数据知识，研讨共享经济的成功失败案例如共享单车ofo的破产等，探索其他的可创新，可共享的产品，并针对现在监管，融资渠道，违约率等问题研讨解决措施。

require essay 3﹚help us unerstan which inustry you plan to focus your financial skills an share how that relates to your track preference. ﹙150 wors﹚

首先提出学生感兴趣的金融创新工具领域，以后想从事证券投资和互联网金融这两个行业，解决好小微企业或居民这种个体的融资投资，社会保障的问题。这些行业要求具备新金融工具创造，金融政策制定，大数据云计算参与后，会大量运用到计量分析的相关知识，和计算机base的模型等知识，因此首选wealth an asset management track进行深造。另外，随着金融开放程度逐渐加深，一国金融创新会引起世界性的资金流动，那么global track 的学习也是极其有用的。因此，global track和 corporate finance an investments track作为次要的2个选项。

optional essay: is there anything else you’ like to share? if so, please provie any aitional information not previously aresse in the application that woul help the amissions committee assess your caniacy. ﹙250-wor limit﹚

主要描述学生在uci 夏校的学习经历。从最初不适应英文环境和专业课程到最终取得好成绩的过程，体现学生对学术的严谨态度和毅力。

申请总结

学生提供的的文书素材存在一个明显的问题，就是素材过于丰富，没有重点，不能针对性地回答题目中的问题。比如jhu的secon require essay中，文书素材详细地将三年的志愿活动的内容事无巨细地展现出来，其中包括关爱残障儿童的活动以及“高区一小讲座”这2个活动。但是，这样重点模糊，反而不能体现学生对某个社区带来的改变，字数也势必超过题目要求。因此，文案老师给学生讲解题目要求，指出怎样构思文书更有优势有亮点，沟通修改文书素材，最终学生听取文案老师的意见，确定只采用福利院的志愿活动素材。在文书初稿中，文案老师对每段的大意和作用做了标注，帮助学生更好地理解这样写的用意。最终学生很满意文书，很快定稿，并顺利拿到了录取。通过这一案例，我们总结的经验是，即使学生具备丰富的实践经历，但不要任其自由发挥，文案老师要做好引导和把控工作，让文书素材物尽其用，在合适的位置上发挥其该有的作用，这样才能为学生争取到理想的录取结果。