美国录取案例：约翰霍普金斯大学应用经济学硕士

申请类型

研究生

教育经历

01/2016-08/2019 Arizona State University Accountancy 3.62/4.0

08/2019-06/2020 Arizona State University Accountancy: Data & Analytics 3.47/4.0

语言/标化考试成绩

无

工作经历

无

实习经历

C onsulting & Auit Trainee 01/2020-02/2020 Hubei, China

K PMG China

l P erforme the tax research with a list of areas for a Japanese normal Meical evice company who planne to set up a company in mainlan China an explore a possible location that can offer them more tax benefit or financial sponsor

l A ssiste the marketing team in conucting research on tax an inustry benefit policies to enterprise who are affecte by coronavirus in Mainlan China an publish the research to help more affecte enterprises to minimize loss

Manager Assistant 07/2018-08/2018 Hebei, China

China Cina Asset Management Co., Lt Hebei Branch

l Utilize Excel part of asset restructuring projects within a team of four

l Learne the process of avance research by using auit reports for asset restructuring

l Assiste in conucting research, esigning the process for the restructuring program, an implementing the program

Volunteer Tax Preparer 02 / 2018 -0 4 / 2018 Tempe, AZ

T empe Volunteer Income Tax Assistance(VITA)

l C omplete 30 hours of online tax law training an 35 hours of volunteer service by helping taxpayers file all necessary return forms

l P repare iniviual tax returns an scheules(Form 1040, Form w-2, Form w-4, etc.) iniviually for taxpayers who may not able to fill the tax return or not known well about what forms to fufilling

l P rovie consultation services for taxpayers to help taxpayers aware of tax return forms they neee an the reason why they get tax return/owe, eveloping client management an communication skills

科研经历

无

奖项/证书

Member of Beta Alpha Psi02/2018-05/2019

申请结果

院校

专业

结果

University of Illinois, Urbana-Champaign

M.s in Managment

拒录

University of Washington

Master of Science in Taxation

拒录

New York University

M.S in integrate marketing

录取

Johns Hopkins University

M.S in applie economics

录取

University of Chicago

M.A in public policy

拒录

Brown University

Master of Public Affairs

拒录

背景分析

学生优势：美本+美研背景，GPA接近3.5， 名企实习经历

学生劣势：没有特别的亮点，但各项条件都还可以

文书思路

学生的美本和美研学术背景很有优势，具有学校要求的先修课程。在PS中强调了学生在美国税务机构实习的经历，突出学生对美国税务系统的了解，更想深入学习经济学知识，尤其是计量经济学和定量研究方法等内容。最后明确地陈述了自己未来的职业目标，即致力于政策性银行或政府机构，做市场分析工作。良好的学术背景和相关的实习经历让学生收获了JHU 和NYU 的应用经济学和整合营销的录取。

申请总结

这个学生自主能力很强，在文书写作过程中，学生很喜欢用一些复杂的词汇和句式，在和学生沟通后，建议她将长短句结合使用，修改不常用的词，难词，这样让人一看知道文书在表达什么内容，清晰明了。