名校录取案例解析

申请类型

研究生

教育经历

University of California, Santa Cruz， Computer Science， GPA 3.24

语言/标化__考试成绩

免托福，GRE 317+3.0

工作经历

Chengu RYD Information Technology Co. Lt｜PDM eveloper

•Use Winchill 10.0 for PLM(Prouct Lifecycle Management) an PDM(Prouct Data Management) omain

•Accoring to the users nee, change the system architecture of Winchill to achieve their PLM an PDM nees

•Designe an evelope the file management, technical library, patent an universal moule areas for Miea company

实习经历

Beijing Che Dao Jun An Science an Technology Cop. Lt｜Trainee

•Followe a professor from Chinese Acaemy of Sciences to o research of vehicle-mounte system’s AI chip algorithm

•Self-stuie the course of CS231N:Convolutional Neural Networks for Visual Recognition

Chengu RYD Information Technology Co. Lt｜Backen Software Engineer

•Learne the company prouct

•Di Backen Developing of Financial Loan System(inclue server an atabase, spring boot architecture)

•Teste system an fixe bug

•Communicate with technicians to improve the system to o research an evelopp AI algorithm

科研经历

ChampionsOP.gg

•Use HTML an css skills to buil a game information webpage, in which provie League of Legens game information to the players by introuctions, pictures an short vieo

•Displaye game upate tutorials an useful tips for players

Anroi Shopping Application｜Scrum Master

•Develope a traing platform which allows customers to post requests, an sellers from other countries provie quotes an trae with buyers

•Mae all functions like normal shopping apps (register, login, post proucts, loa proucts with the search function, auto-positioning function, profile page, orer/buy history .etc)

•Use Anroi Stuio to buil the front-en an mySQL to control atabase

•Worke with front-en part, incluing builing all the functionality of the app, esigning work

MIPS Control Harware

•Use MIPS assembly language to control Uno32 harware

•Wrote a loop to control LED lights lighting sequences, an use four switches with a software-base elay to control the spee of LEDs moving

Anroi Travelling Application (TripPlanner)

Built a traveling software which allows users to start a new trip with setting the ates, buget an estinations an aing activities to the trip. Trip owners or members coul invite other people an see them in their trips. People coul also share the money by transferring by PayPal or Venmo API.

•Use Anroi Stuio to buil the front-en an Firebase to control atabase

FreeBSD OS Moification an Optimization

•Change the rules of pages an processes picking an scheule insie the operating system

•Ae the encrypt an ecrypt functions to the file by users

•Use VirtualBox as virtual machine

Use C to Simulate a Pipeline CPU

•Wrote a software version pipeline CPU with BTB array, cache an virtual memory functions

•Divie the whole process intofive-stage, Fetch, Decoe, Execute, Memory an Writeback

奖项/证书

UCSC Dean’s Scholarships an Awar;

Dean’s Honor for 3 Semesters

申请结果

New York University

MS in Computer Science

录取到Computer Engineering

学生优势：美本学生，申请比较占优势。该生申请过程中非常配合，并且对于自己定位也相对准确，没有选择最热门竞争激烈的CS，有的是CE或ECE专业。学生有工作经历且与本专业相关性强，推荐人含金量较高。

学生劣势：GPA不高，并且申请过程中，其中一位推荐人看到学生成绩后拒绝给学生继续做网推，已提交学校是否推荐也未知。

背景分析

学生为美本申请，但是GPA并不高，并且有下滑趋势。GRE在CS申请者中也并无太大优势。申请过程中避开了“门槛高”的专业，选择相对好录取的专业申请。

文书思路

学生是CS背景，又有明确的兴趣方向（Data Science 或者Analytics）,文书写作上直接具体到了研究小方向上，并且跟之前的工作经历相结合

申请总结

申请过程中，学生非常配合，并且在美国生活多年的亲戚对于文书润色也帮助良多。