商业分析高端录取：三维普通

申请类型

研究生

教育经历

2016/09-2020/06西南财经大学金融专业 本科3.2

语言/标化考试成绩

雅思：7；gre: 322

工作经历

无

实习经历

aiesec enterprise management consulting co., lt., chengu branch

vice presient of epartment of marketing; 21hours/week01/2018-01/2019

ÿ set an annual goal an mae plans base on the previous ata.

ÿ analyze the target consumers through market research, ata analysis an one-on-one interviews.

ÿ planne marketing activities accoring to user portraits, successfully expaning our business to the new market in sichuan university an achieving the goal of 100+ people signing up for the event within one ay.

ÿ le the team to achieve the performance exceeing the target rate by 20%, an 60% higher than that of the last year.

ÿ manage the aiesec chengu wechat public platform, leaing to 300 average article views an 857 new followers of the platforms.

sales group leaer of overseas talent introuction epartment; 21 hours/week

09/2017-12/2017

ÿ le a sales team of four people an traine all the team members.

ÿ built the information management system an manage projects through the software of hubspot an salesforce.

ÿ le the team to sign contracts with two companies an introuce foreign talents that matche them.

ÿ accompanie the team members to communicate with the leaer of epartment of human resource.

salesperson of overseas talent introuction epartment; 28 hours/week

03/2017-07/2017

ÿ conucte market analysis through software of hubspot an salesforce.

ÿ talke with the target companies over the telephone an mae appointment with them to speak face to face.

ÿ introuce the matche foreign talents to companies an signe contracts on talent introuction with them.

科研经历

无

奖项/证书

acaemic scholarship 09/2019

acaemic scholarship 03/2017

申请结果

wake forest university

ms in business analytics

终止

washington university in st. louis

ms in business analytics

终止

university of rochester

ms in business analytics

录取

johns hopkins university

ms in business analytics an risk management

录取

forham university

ms in business analytics

录取

university of southern california

ms in business analytics

拒录

braneis university

ms in business analytics

拒录

university of california, irvine

ms in business analytics

拒录

university of washington

ms in business analytics

拒录

syracuse university

ms in business analytics

录取

背景分析

学生优势：gpa，语言，gre没有拖后腿

学生劣势：同时gpa，语言，gre都不是很突出。

文书思路

essay 1 ﹙require﹚: in 250–500 wors total, respon to the following prompts:

· escribe your short-term an long-term goals for post mba or post ms.

· ientify a back-up plan shoul your short-term goal not be immeiately attainable.

· how oes your past eucation an experience support your career objectives?

· what aspects of your intene simon business school program make it a goo choice for your grauate stuy?*

因为只有250-500词的空间，所以文书基本在回答问题，没有多余的阐述，否则容易超字数。学生短期希望在互联网公司做市场分析专员，锻炼一定时间后考虑创业，开一家小型咨询公司，专为小型企业和个人提供对口服务，价格更优惠。如果毕业后没能找到理想的工作，则在目标企业申请其它岗位，反思没有应聘上的原因，同时进一步提升自己，在做好自己的本职工作基础上找机会进入自己喜欢的岗位。

学生早在大一期间做销售实习时就认识到市场分析能提高工作效率。当上市场部执行副主席后用简单的数据分析做过市场分析，并且用python建立了微信自动回复功能，从而提高了整个团队的工作效率。这段经历使自己对ba产生浓厚的兴趣。大学阶段通过课程，学到了python, matlab等编程语言在分析中的重要作用，在sas 的ba项目中学以致用，这些经历都为实现职业目标奠定了基础，同时也让自己意识到缺乏编程和实践经验，需要进一步提升。

而西蒙商学院的项目不论从课程设置，教学理念还是实践，都符合自己的需求，而且就业指导服务和数据分析俱乐部也为自己提供更多帮助。因此，十分希望加入西蒙商学院。

essay 2 ﹙require﹚: in 25 wors or less, provie us with an interesting fact about yourself not expresse elsewhere in your application. ﹙25 wor limit﹚*

学生的生日是一月一日，很容易被记住，同时也认为自己很特别和幸运。

essay 3 ﹙optional﹚: share aitional information you think is important in the evaluation of your application, incluing any concerns you think the amissions committee may have regaring your caniacy. ﹙500 wor limit﹚

学生用这篇文书解释了自己是一个什么样的人，用三个词形容自己，分别是好奇，以解决问题为导向，世界公民。在解释这三个词的过程中通过对性格的阐述最后回归到自己非常适合ba这个专业。

申请总结

这个学生的三维成绩都合格，但并不突出，而且申的是ba这个专业，前三十的学校处于录取和拒录的边缘。但学生胜在有想法，而且有实打实的实践经验，具体实践事例不空泛，而且非常有自己的想法，为申请增加了很多优势。

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