雅思实战使用技巧-关于"广告“话题的讨论

toay avertising can be seen everywhere in aily life. it has influence what people think is important an sometimes has negative effects on people’s life. to what extent o you agree or isagree?

 广告在日常生活中随吃可见。它影响了人们对事物重要性的判断，对人们的生活也有些负面影响。你对此观点同意与否?

话题分析：

本题讨论广告是否不仅影响人们认为重要的事情而且还对人们的生活产生负面影响。题目类型是议论文的一种观点类是to what extant o you agree or isagree类型，可以采用双边讨论，也就是5段式作文。

p1：引入话题+表明观点﹙不同意﹚

p2：承认公益广告的益处：更快更广泛地传递一些公众问题。

p3：指出广告的弊端： 对人们的一些想法有负面影响。

p4：指出广告的弊端：会浪费消费的金钱。

p5:总结：重申观点

参考范文：

almost every single iniviual in toay’s society is bombare with ifferent avertising from chilren’s programs on saturay morning to talk shows an prime time tv an most of us has get use to it. however, though informing consumers of more useful information, avertising in most cases take a heavy toll on them.

some public service avertising coul motivate an eucate the general public to pay attention to non-commercial issues such as ais, eforestation, family planning, etc. so powerful is this meia that it is capable of reaching every corner of the worl as fast as it can an of publicizing ifferent significant ieas to all people. however, this is not that simple in reality as avertising more often than not mainly functions as a tool to avertise the availability of a prouct or service an to inuce consumers to buy proucts an to increase sales.

avertising elivers a false image an therefore influence how people think about themselves- often in a negative way. for aults, base on the images they see in avertisements, women may feel they shoul be thin an beautiful just as the top fashion moel, thus misleaing them to expect an unrealistic, unattainable image. without it, they will become frustrate an less confient an this exert a etrimental effect on their health. for chilren, they are barrage with not only isney vieos, proucts as well as clothing but other ieas, like the notion that every little girl shoul be a “princess”, an impractical expectation that lures them to excessively emphasize appearance.

irect-to-consumers avertising also results in wasting ollars. this is primarily because in orer to tempt consumers to purchase, manufacturers often iealize their proucts, such as some beauty an health proucts but minimize their sie effects. most consumers may try an purchase them impulsively even by a higher price but this always ens with failure as these proucts harly live up to their promises an finally are thrown away.

in conclusion, informative as avertising proves to be, it oes pose risks to people’s min an finance. but it is still necessary in people’s lives an the key is how to use it critically.

ref from：邢睿赢老师

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