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PS的不同叫法:PS虽然是Personal Statement的简称,翻译为个人陈述,但是个人陈述在不同的学校叫法可能会有所不同,最常见的有:Personal Statement,Statement of Purpose,Acaemic Statement of Purpose,Statement of Objectives,Statement of Intent,Letter of Interests,Acaemic Objectives……其实这些都是我们常说的PS。
书写内容。
一、希望申请该校的什么专业,如果申请硕士或者博士研究生,还应当阐明自己希望学习和研究的方向;
二、对所申请专业的理解,最好能说明自己希望在此专业学得什么东西;
三、陈述自己的优势,以证明自己适合该课程并有能力完成该课程。那么,哪些可以视为自己的优势呢?比如学习成绩,专业研究经历等。如果能提供发表的专业论文或者跟某个导师从事某个研究项目的经历,则能为自己的申请加分不少;
四、展示自己的综合素质和能力。一般澳洲大学并不完全依据申请者的学术与语言成绩就决定是否录取,而是希望申请者是一位综合素质能力突出的学生。参加志愿者活动、学生活动或是组织某些大型活动的经历都是可以加分的因素。另外,如果申请者有艺体或者大型比赛获奖的经历都可以拿来作为相当好的写作素材;
五、选择该学校的原因。这一点是主要看你对申请的学校是否了解。建议申请者要充分了解这所学校,阐明这个学校最吸引你的地方。
六、谈谈自己的研究或者学习打算,最好再谈一下自己的职业规划。职业规划最好能和希望学习的专业紧密结合。
书写技巧。
1、突出个性化
在个人陈述的开头,可以用你一个独特的故事开始你的个人陈述,以充分的个人情感表达对这个课程项目的独特兴趣。
2、表现独特性
描述你的重要经历,既可以是你兴趣发展的历史经历,也可以是增强你申请该课程决心的特殊经历,还可以是对你的人生产生深刻影响的经历。
3、表明可行性
你对学校、课程、研究领域、教授的了解将有助于为入学部工作人员留下深刻影响。你在解释为什么你与申请课程相匹配时,这方面的内容将加强可行性的说明(注:这方面的信息可以从网络、学校资料等方面获得)。
4、委婉地表达
你必须在个人陈述中诚恳地表达你的观点和想法,但是必须策略地描述你的优势和不足,即以积极、肯定的观点表达你能够满足入学要求,委婉地表达你会改进不足。特别是你的不足与入学要求相冲突时,这一点显得尤为重要。
5、澳洲留学申请清晰陈述目标
你必须在个人陈述中表明你所申请的课程将有助于你达到你的预定目标。注意在写作中灵活地使用短期目标和长期目标之间的辩证关系。
参考范文。
Pick up any newspaper toay an you can fin many healines relate to stories about economic problems an trens. I am always eeply absorbe in the economic news, especially in the analysis an escription of the capital markets.
I was born in XX City, a large city with lots of heavy inustry companies. My father is an engineer in a shipbuiling institute an my mother is a technician in an electronic apparatus factory. Since I was very young, they began to teach me plenty of knowlege of natural science an hope me to become an engineer like them one ay. But they change their min when they fin me intereste in the fiel of economics, an absolutely ifferent area they were not familiar with. They agree to sen me to XXX Finance an Economic University which has been ranke in the top ten in my country by commerce economics.
In the year of 2000, I entere the faculty of Investing Economy of that university an starte my four-year strict eucation. In the first two years, I lai more emphasis on the basic theories, such as moels in economics an investing. Later in my 3r an 4th semesters, I foun that lacking of practice became a bottle neck of further stuying. Fortunately, my grauate thesis tutor, Professor XXX an Teacher XXX provie me some goo opportunities to practice in the Company of Nahu Real Estate an Sanxia Securities Company, in which I live a substantial an pleasing time. Besies my major, computer science is my anther interest. In the last year of my university, I was certifie with MCSE(Microsoft Certifie System Engineer) an got a part time teaching job in Richinfo Teaching Center, which largely increase my communication abilities. When I finishe my grauate thesis, I got the Bachelor s Degree of Economics successfully in July 2000.
On the ay of 28 September 2004, I began my career in the accounting an funing epartment of Beijing XXX Company an was assigne the uty of investing. My company usually got irregular cash flows so lots of money was left unuse. At first I followe my workmate, Mr. XX, a senior staff in my epartment an put only a little fun in the securities market. The initial success was a great encouragement to me an I began to invest more. 2002 was a golen year for me though the whole market was not goo. In that year I amit 90,000 shares of the stock--Sea Oil Project an 50,000 shares of stock-Da Sha in thier Initial Public Offering an sell them in the same year. That brought us 1,100,000¥ profits before taxation an my work results was highly confirme by the general manager an other colleagues. The luck continue to the first half year of 2003 until the stagnancy of the whole stock market in July. Now I am irectly le by the general manager an o some management an marketing work as well.
The four years of working mature me rapily not only in technique skills but also in abilities of communication an cooperation with colleagues an other person. With the opening policy of China s Capital Market, I realize internationalization is a tren I must make goo preparations for. So I etermine to go abroa to go on further learning about financial knowlege an improve my English skills an the course of master of finance will be my best choice..
Socialising is very important to me, an I am always keen to meet new people. I enjoy trying new culture an new foos. My goo culinary skills will prove very useful to the aily life of my future foreign stuying. I enjoy traveling an learning about moern history. Music is one of my biggest hobbies, an I use music to help me unwin an reflect on things. I use the internet to keep up with current affairs an sports news.
I have always been a keen sportsman, representing my school of basketball competition many times an now I often play it in the evening. I also enjoy playing tennis an table tennis, as well as football.
I believe that I have mae sufficient preparations for a new university life. My skills together with my ambition to succee prove me to be goo caniate for your master egree..
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