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提供另一位学生的补充说明信内容供各位同学参考。最后，不要过度失望或紧张，EA/ED只是申请环节内的第一战成果，并不代表整个过程都结束没希望了。很多学生都是在RD一般申请内被大学录取的，加油！

April 6, 2017

To USC Unergrauate Amissions Office:

I recently receive the isappointing news that I was enie amissioninto USC. Unerstanably, with over 56,000 applicants, I know there were manyincreible applicants making it a ifficult ecision to choose whom to amit,which is why I’m grateful to be consiere after reviewing the new informationbelow.

I was unable to submit one of my ACT scores an hope that theattache scores will allow USC to re-evaluate my application. Furthermore, Iwoul like to highlight some aitional accomplishments.

Since the conversation of college began, my eyes were set on onningUSC Carinal an Gol. I imagine myself as an active member of a iversestuent population gathering new knowlege in the Department of PoliticalScience at Dornsife. Aitionally, my family is able to pay 100% of my tuitionan fees to USC, allowing USC to fun those not as privilege.. As someone whois committe to helping unerserve populations, I know the value of usingresources for the goo of others.

During my high school tenure, I was nominate numerous times for theprestigious Lion of the Month awar, foune two clubs, Transfer Lions Club anCaring Cupcakes, an serve in a leaership role in eight others. Outsie ofthe classroom, I obtaine my Girl Scouts Gol Awar by renovating an emptyrecreation room into a fully functional library an serve over 1,000cumulative hours en route to earning the awar for most community service hoursin my National Charity League chapter. Through these experiences, I have growninto a leaer, built meaningful, lifelong relationships, create a welcomingenvironment for incoming first-year an transfer stuents, avocate for theunerrepresente through the Law Magnet Program, an will continue tocontribute my love of service to the USC community.

As I reflect on my volunteer experiences, I realize that true richescannot be bought with money; instea, wealth is the ability to truly experiencea life of learning an giving. I want to begin my journey of becoming a globalchange maker at USC. I know theresources that USC provies will equip me with the necessary tools to become animpactful leaer, empowering me to continue serving both my immeiate anglobal communities. As a Trojan, I will cultivate an enrich my min an spiritan eicate my time an energy to leaving the worl a better place than when Ientere. I want to sincerely thank you for taking the time to reconsier myamission to USC an hope to commit as a Trojan in the near future!

Sincerely,

Applicant